Here is a peice of writing that I wrote after the floods in Nashville,and I was just determined to write something. Here it is:
"Floods" by Hannah K.
As a person uses a hammer to beat on a nail;
The rain is beating on the ground.
You walk into the car.
You think everything is fine.
"It's just a little spell of rain."
But little do you know what is about to happen.
You drive on to the road.
There is much traffic;you stop.
You finally realize what is starting to occur.
The water is rising higher and higher.
Crowded headlights and brake lights shine beneath the rain water.
For if you were to fly above, the water would practically be lit with a hazy glow.
The water is still rising.
But you don't know what to do.
You don't know how to swim!
Crash!
The water goes through your car windows.
It then slams you down under.
You and your car are quickly sinking.
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I'm afraid you drowned right then and there.
Since you chose Christ,you were saved and live in Heaven.
Your life was taken away in a second.
So choose the narrow path and spread the Gospel wisely.
Imagine how many people die who are unsaved.
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DeleteI like this, Hannah! You have a future in poetry! If you keep writing, that is. You'll get better and better. I like how straightforward this is. The transition from life to death is a little awkward, but I think it works. And yes. It's so important to spread God's amazing love to the world. There should be more poems or songs that stress that point, so GOOD JOB!
ReplyDeleteThanks!..I will keep writing,but it is not my main hobbie(as you know.)...I revised since last time I read it to you,so I hope it is better:)
DeleteUm... what is your main hobby again??? Oh, that's right. School.
Delete:) :) :)
ReplyDelete<> :D :D
These are the three amigos: :) :) :)
ReplyDeleteAnd this is you and me: :D :D
..^-^
Delete.(0~o)
/(...)\
..U.U.
This is my owl..and here is my bunnies giving you cookies and waffles..
....(\_/)
....(^-^)
....(>..)># Here is your waffle!
.....U.U
...(\_/)
...(^-^)
...(>..)>o Here is your cookie!
....U.U
.....(;)> I love relaxing in the lake:)
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At least my duck likes the flood!..?...:)
That is completely not what my animals are supposed to look like....They are all fixed up in notepad:)
DeleteWell, this one should work:
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Now pick up the crayon and draw a limosine. :)
You meen a limozine horse?...Some other people reading won't know the inside joke..:/
DeleteHere's a few things you need to fix:
ReplyDeleteYou spelled "finally" wrong. <<That's what it's supposed to be.
Also, in the last line, you have improper use of the word "whom". "Whom" is for objective case. In your sentence, you are using it as a pronoun for the subject. "Who" is subjective case. So it should be: "Imagine how many people die who are unsaved."
Fixed...;)
DeleteHi Hannah. Nice blog! I saw you came by my blog Arizona Jones and I saw your member profile. We have some things we share, a love of Jesus, and the music of Alison Krauss. Keep writing and using your gifts for His glory. I wrote this about doing that and how it help me share my faith with my father. Your gift can do the same. As in reach people that you might not expect to. http://arizjones.blogspot.com/2011/07/using-what-god-has-given-you-drawing.html
ReplyDeleteBless ya!